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پنجشنبه 6 تیر 1392 09:28 ق.ظنویسنده : آفتاب

 
چند خطی حرف دارم با دوستای گلی که لطف کردن و داستان بی محتوا و مسخره ی منو خوندن.
وبلاگ زدم فقط برای اینکه همین داستانو بنویسم،تا از فکری که هرشب قبل از خواب میومد تو ذهنم خلاص شم،فکر دختری که به بهانه ادامه تحصیل به لندن میره،اما در کنار درسش دربه در دنبال دیدن بندیکت کامبربچه!پیداش میکنه،با همون ترفندی که تو داستان گفتم(!) توجهش رو به خودش جلب میکنه و تو یه رستوران باش قرار میذاره.
بعدش چی؟چی بش میگه؟چی به سرشون میاد؟!
نمیدونستم،هنوزم نمیدونم که داستان شد فضاحتی مثل این.نقطه ی ننگی برای کارنامه ی نویسندگیم و از همه بدتر باعث خجالت برای شما عزییییزانی که وقت گرانبهاتون رو گذاشتید و داستانم رو تا انتها دنبال کردید.
روند داستان از بعد از قسمت رستوران دیگه باب میل من نبود،اما من محدودیت داشتم و نمیتونستم همه ی افکارم رو وارد داستان کنم و این بش خیلی لطمه زد.به طوری که آخر داستان تبدیل شد به خاطرات یه دختر و نقش بازیگر بزرگ سینما تو داستان از بین رفت!
پایانی که تو ذهنم بود با چیزی که نوشتم زمین تا آسمون فرق داشت.

خودخواهانه س اما ازتون میخوام منو ببخشید.
دوست بی هنرتون
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پنجشنبه 6 تیر 1392 09:15 ب.ظ
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پنجشنبه 6 تیر 1392 03:41 ب.ظ
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